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Hridyanshi's avatar

This is so well written! Each line carried such beautiful emotions and had me hooked. The ending metaphor of paper and leaving marks? So amazing.

Ellie's avatar

You should watch Twin Peaks. I feel like you'd like Twin Peaks. This reminded me of Twin Peaks, I don't know why.

Moving, as always.

mari's avatar

wow i loved this

Kylee's avatar

That first line stuck its claws into me, and I knew this was gonna be good

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☸︎ nicole archer's avatar

i am always lost in daydreams abt him 😔😭

nia 🌷's avatar

this brought me to tears a little bit

nia 🌷's avatar

your imagery is amazing and you're amazing

iris♡'s avatar

i love you omg